Ryan Purdy
1. I think my final draft turned out well, I think my introduction sentences in the body paragraphs could have been much stronger.
2. I worked on beefing up my body paragraphs, adding another body paragraph and a conclusion.
3. Overall I thought it was difficult figuring out what the lines of my poem really meant. Overall I thought it was pretty easy coming up with a thesis statement.
4. Overall I thought my strengths were the body paragraphs and my weakness was the introduction
5. If I had more time on this essay I would work on making my introduction better and making the first sentences of each body paragraph better.
3 things I will get points on is turning it in on time, having 500-600 words, and having a creative title.
3 things I will lose points on is my essay having grammar errors, not having strong body paragraph introduction sentences, my conclusion leaving the readers something to think about.
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